Heave!

As I sat in rush hour traffic yesterday, I was struck by a sudden idea on how to dramatically improve the beginning of Chapter XII. It was a minor change, likely insignificant to anyone but myself. It was like that perfect tap, that hits at just the right spot, and cracks the dam. Suddenly, the words flooded into my brain. It clicked, at last.

So, I restarted Chapter XII, AGAIN. Five pages in, but this one, I think, is going to stick.

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