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March 22, 2004

Over the weekend, I was typing up Chapter VII, and came to the realization that I just was not happy with it. In every chapter so far there have been parts I haven’t liked, from sentences to even a whole section of two, but never a whole chapter. This time around, it was just the opposite.

I didn’t like the pacing, I didn’t like the character development, and I thought that their motivations were forced and awkward. Besides, in my planning for Chapter VIII I’d already decided at least one section would have to be completely rewritten.

So, despite my track record so far, I’ve decided to hold off on Chapter VIII and completely rewrite Chapter VII first.

I began the task of rewriting last night, and managed about four and a half pages. Already it feels much better.

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